Talk:Metropolitan State College of Denver
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[edit] Second largest?
If the new “second largest” claim is based on enrollment, University of Colorado at Boulder and Colorado State University seem to be bigger (including graduate students). —Fleminra 07:29, 20 December 2005 (UTC)
[edit] Fluff
I am removing this text:
- students experience urban excitement, convenience and diversity, as well as unmatched cultural and recreational opportunities. It is the second largest college in the state with an enrollment of over 25,000 students.
until citations are made for:
- urban excitement levels of Metro State students
- convenience levels of Metro State students
- diversity levels of Metro State students and the surrounding environment
- #1 ranking w.r.t. cultural opportunities
- #1 ranking w.r.t. recreational opportunities
- Metro State is "larger" than CU-Boulder and CSU (# of students? geographical area?)
- —Fleminra 05:50, 14 January 2006 (UTC)
[edit] Passive voice
It seems to me that the recent additions to the first paragraph would be more credible without so much passive voice (e.g. “…college is noted…”, “…is recognized nationally…”). Who's doing the noting and recognizing? —Fleminra 02:05, 17 January 2006 (UTC)
